Monday, February 1, 2010

Jorge Sandungha´s Legend

Part 1

Long time ago,there use to be a little worm called Jorge Sandungha, his parents name were "Malagueña Salerosa"(mom) "Eduardo Sandungha" (dad) and his brother "Papuncho Sandungha"; the little worm have extreme intelligence so he can move objects with his brain.
He was born in Achicumbaja D.C. the capital of Achicumbaja. This city eat and use disgusting things.

Jorge Sandungha was evoluting into a human ,he become into a kind of man that can do everything , he begin to travel to every place , he buy everything he saw, so he become a very rich man but he give everything to people that need economical help , he want a low profile so that´s why he give everything to other people . And after his travel he return to his native city Achicumbaja D.C.

Jorge always made new invents like a machine for traveling through the time and he always go to bathroom , because it was like a tradition in Achicumbaja . This city has a conection with nature and animals. Jorge know all the profesions in the world , he study the profesions in Jorgito University, this university was from him.He was the most intelligent in all Achicumbaja.

3 comments:

  1. correct you spelling mistakes. you have to improve your past simple.but is a good blog and goos stories.

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  2. It is a very well story but be carefull wiht the past tense.

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  3. it is a very good story but be careful whit past tense

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